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poet, editor, designer, short story writer. currently studying english with creative writing at university college falmouth. editor and designer of the arts section for the falmouth/exeter university newspaper flex, and co-founder of mobpocket.org

Tuesday, September 02, 2008

The Sixth Note


Faithless Men

Faithless, cold, and emotionless.
No stench of fresh cooked bread

or the fresh sea air
mingling with the dead
aroma of men who fish for money
to buy honey
and bread.

3 comments:

RJM said...

it took me until just now to realise what you were doing with the titles!

i really like this one, especially the last three lines.

C J Campbell said...

Haha! Yeah I just thought it would add a little more to it and hopefully tie them together a bit more. I couldn't think of anything catchy for 6 though.

RJM said...

it's all good =)